英文作文-９２１地震

[tw159134]

What was I doing when the ９２１ earthquake happened?
In ９２１ earthquake, I and my girlfriend are together.
We are on the bed, doing love. I am up, and she is down.
So we are up and down, up and down ...... together.
The earthquake is more and more big,
and we are more and more excited.
Though my girlfriend says no,no ......
I know her heart say yes,yes......
At last, we are into high 潮 together.
That day, we are the happiest a day.
I hope the last time is fast a little come.
--End--

 

[Sogetsu]

好爛的文法... :fi: 雖然說看的懂 :O||:

 

[bl721]

看了以後我笑了 :lol: 這文法簡直是濫到不行 :ph34r:

 

[catanddog]

Originally posted by tw159134@Dec 22 2004, 03:50 PM
What was I doing when the ９２１ earthquake happened?
In ９２１ earthquake, I and my girlfriend are together.
We are on the bed, doing love. I am up, and she is down.
So we are up and down, up and down ...... together.
The earthquake is more and more big,
and we are more and more excited.
Though my girlfriend says no,no ......
I know her heart say yes,yes......
At last, we are into high 潮 together.
That day, we are the happiest a day.
I hope the last time is fast a little come.
--End--

看過了~~~!! :D

we are into high 潮 together.

改成we are into high together.

就可以拉~~~ ;ya;

 

[tacoChang]

有看過一個衣服牌子叫做"HIGHTIDE"...(地攤貨?)
最後這句"I hope the last time is fast a little come."
根本看不懂...除非是像VB一樣"直譯" :O||:

 

[嵐之舞]

文法真是是爛到不行 :fi: :fi: :fi:

 

[can]

看的出來搖的很爽......... l||| :O||: l|||